My name is Rosmery. I am from Cuba. I am 18 years old. I have been here for three years, and one year ago I moved to Hialeah. I live with my mother and my stepfather. I don't like to practice any sport, but I execise in the gym with my mother. I want to be a nurse like my aunt. I don't work yet, but I wan't to find a job to help my mother. I like to go out with my friends and have a lot of fun. When I was in High School, I took dance classes because I love to dance. I took the classes with my friend Lilian. She is now in my writing class. I had a lot of fun in that dance class, and I learned to dance ballet .Well, I hope that you guys like my life .
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When I was in High School I took dance classes beacuse i love dance I took the classes with my friend Lilian she is now in my writing class I had a lot of fun in that class and I learned to dance ballet ,well I hope that you guys like my life .
This is a very long sentence. Where are your commas? Maybe you want to separate the ideas...