My name is Lilian Valle, and I am from Tela, Honduras. I am 20 years old, but I am very excited waiting for my 21st birthday. I want to describe myself with three important characteristics. First of all, I am a friendly person. I always enjoy meeting new people and to keep having the old ones. I try to help my friends in all that I can. Second, I am a dedicated person. I do not stop until I reach my goals, and I try hard to do my best in everything that I start doing. Third, I am a christian person. I always thanks God for every thing that happen in my life, also I believe that without God we can not handle with everything that life give us. In brief, I am friendly, dedicated and the most important a Christian person. Nice to meet you.
Hi Lilian,
ReplyDeleteHere are some suggestions for edits:
my 21 years birthday- the expression is -my 21st birthday.
enjoy to meet - use the "ing" after enjoy
for example - I enjoy running in the afternoon
I am a dedicate - make sure to add a "d" in dedicate to make it into an adjective.