My name is Madelin, and I am 22 years old. I am from Cuba. I have been living in Miami since 2009. I want to mention three important characteristics in order to describe myself. First of all, I am a happy person. I like to party, to dance and laugh. Secondly, I am friendly. I like to visit my friends and, I love making new friends every day. Finally, I am a responsible person. I am always on time for work and school. And, I like to take care of my younger sister. In conclusion, I am happy, friendly and responsible person.
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ReplyDeleteI like to visit my friend
Do you have one friend in particular? or you mean many friends?
Also, try to use "like" a little less... use other synonyms - "enjoy" could be one