I would like to introduce myself. My name is Dorcas .I am 21 years old.I am from Cuba.I want to become a pharmacist but I am not sure yet.I live in Hialeah in an apartment with my mother , my stepfather and my little brother.I work at the mall in a accesories store.I've been working there for a year and four months.I am a friendly and polite person and sometimes my problem is that I talk too much because I like to make friends.I studied English before,but this is my first semester here.I have many hobbies.I like listening to music,I love to dance and I am happy always if I have my friends with me.I am person who likes to help other people and my favorite wish is to travel a lot,and that's all me.
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ReplyDeleteNice paragraph.. Just make sure you have "two" spaces after the periods and one space after a "comma".
Also, you are missing some "commas" in your compound sentences.